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poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-02-27 08:56 AM

Rains on the vegetable patch
Sickened, it came waning
From the up North, land of ice.
Feverish cloud, it came only
To ebb at your windowpane.
Rain; rain on your small love’s patch
Where your vegetables grow
Drunk on white blood of the cloud.
You never knew the story
The cloud came here to say.

Come out. If the rainbow may
Remember from a life
Over the other end.

clever talks delay friendship!

© Copyright 2008 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-02-27 12:08 PM

Awesome, dear Poddar!

A keeper!! It carries emotion.

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-02-27 01:39 PM

May I start off by saying how much I like your photo! ~ Followed by saying how much I like your poem!

"Rain; rain on your small love’s patch
Where your vegetables grow"

How poetic is that! ~ VERY.

Warm hug,
Linda

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2008-02-27 02:45 PM

beautiful and sentimental. It was indeed a very poetic poem, my dear friend.
Very good!!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-27 03:44 PM

Love it so much!

ARCTIC WIND

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