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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-02-27 06:28 AM



old oceans are soft gloves
the worn by a lover kind
that helped carry a dream bucket
with half full hurry
just when we needed another
to dam up the never again
when it was overfilled lonely

they wrinkle their noses friendly
understanding our heart sounds
like an old dog's wagging
when his head is down playful
ready to be no better friend
then a god without judgment
needing only a petting worship

on the mornings they bring tide candy
salty sweet like a secret kiss
and push the lingering down our shirts
to make us itch for more
until we have to turn around
and face down our wanting to
just hoping we can get up again

finally coved, and mostly well healed

_____________

daark


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2008-02-27 06:31 AM


and push the lingering down our shirts
to make us itch for more
until we have to turn around
and face down our wanting to
just hoping we can get up again

finally coved, and mostly well healed
and face down our wanting to....what an incredible line.  

Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-02-27 09:46 AM


Well and then there, that was a healthy sigh...

thank you.

Lovely.

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-27 12:55 PM


when his head is down playful
ready to be no better friend
then a god without judgment
needing only a petting worship



Always amazing to see how you play with words.

I sense a touch of melancholy in this no doubt excellent write.

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-02-27 06:52 PM


ladies....thank you for walking down this side street of mosey town with me...you bless me
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-02-27 07:48 PM


ah beautiful Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-02-27 09:36 PM


I cant believe I had almost missed this one!-- Dark, this is a very Wonderfully written Write!

Wonderfully Penned

ARCTIC WIND

TomMark
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7 posted 2008-02-27 09:59 PM


Beautiful, another fine "light" one.  Just beautiful. Thank you for the sharing.
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2008-02-27 10:02 PM


achingly beautiful
feeling you here

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-02-28 05:48 AM


thank you pipfriends....you do bless me
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10 posted 2008-03-01 10:51 PM


D

Sometimes the beauty of what you write moves me to becoming almost speechless.  I love this and kind of rode the waves of the images and words.  Beautiful.

A

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