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Optic Verve
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Optic Verve |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Optic Verve Flair, in the brush stroke of spring Beat of the changing of guard Back from a journey to sing Pleasantries awaken the yard Beat of the changing of guard Beg to crack, from the earth peers the bud Pleasantries awaken the yard Dance of raindrops turn hard pan to mud Beg to crack, from the earth peers the bud Reaching out to the limitless sky Dance of raindrops turn hard pan to mud Resonant calls on wing from the fly Reaching out to the limitless sky Tempts remember the colors bright hue Resonant calls on wing from the fly Calls the earth, beckon forth and renew Tempts remember the colors bright hue Back from a journey to sing Calls the earth, beckon forth and renew Flair, in the brush stroke of spring Copyright Kkh 3/15/08 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-16-2008 09:52 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
ThisDiamond, Very nice poem--it's always good to see a well formed pantoum pop-up now and again. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful in meaning and form, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Written! TD ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
TD, wonderful piece & I love the title.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
We should have named you something that has a nature theme to it....No, not mother goose and the nursery rhymes... |
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