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MJ
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0 posted 2008-02-25 04:17 PM


Will poetry be
cure for my verbosity?
I shall write and see.

[This message has been edited by MJ (02-25-2008 05:09 PM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 2008-02-25 04:32 PM


And you do so well!!
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2 posted 2008-02-25 05:55 PM


Interesting!

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3 posted 2008-02-25 06:14 PM


Nothing wrong with verbosity, I think poets need a certain amount of it. Nice little poem.
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simon
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4 posted 2008-02-25 06:19 PM


Not sure what verbosity is: note to self :LOOK IT UP THEN! But really enjoyed this.
MJ
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5 posted 2008-02-25 06:38 PM


I tend to be very wordy. While I don't consider verbosity to be a bad thing, writing poetry (which is rare for me) has challenged me to say more with less, or perhaps not as much at one time. Seems like that's been good for me.

Thanks for the kind comments!

divine chaos
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6 posted 2008-02-27 05:14 AM


writing poetry makes me -more- verbose lol
good luck!!

Sheli

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~Aristophanes~

MJ
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7 posted 2008-02-28 01:21 AM


Sheli, for some reason it makes me write less, and I am finding it very enjoyable. :-)
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8 posted 2008-03-01 10:35 PM


Is the cure working?
(smiles)
I liked this.

Alison

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9 posted 2008-03-02 02:06 PM


Who was it said Procrastination is the thief of time ?....
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