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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-02-25 04:08 PM

      Moon Dreams

As the last lovely songbird
sings the setting sun…
a fine farewell,
and the sky is trimmed
in high-curling clouds,
(arched in a grand
   star-taper canopy)
on this profound Winter’s
  eve,
soft moonlight spills
over meadow and forest,
chasing the brooding
  twilight shadows,
to mellow man’s
terrors and trappings
  of the day.
It is then that the deep
  spirit senses,
our most precious dreams
are never truly lost
to cruel reality’s crush,
but linger instead
to dance forever…
on the far side of that
  mystic moon!

MJ
Member

since 2008-02-21

Posts 60

1 posted 2008-02-25 04:12 PM

Lovely!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-02-25 04:33 PM

Bravo!!! What a wonderful (dangerously verging on optimistic?) write!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-02-25 05:58 PM

Wonderfully Penned

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-02-25 06:11 PM

Lovely and ver optistic, made me feel good.
Ida

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2008-02-25 07:08 PM

very beautiful. This is unusually soft and the dream...after all, is not lost. beautiful, dear Bruce!!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-02-25 07:14 PM

Yes, Bruce, dreams are a precious ally of our spiritual and physical wellbeing.

This is very lovely.

Applause!

Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2008-02-25 08:38 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

This is very fine work. As your typical cynical wise-guy, I’ve always wondered what happened to those most precious dreams. As you note, they’re now way past the moon-- and that’s fine. I’m happy with the not too precious, more mundane dreams realized. Thank God for them.

Bobby

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

8 posted 2008-02-27 01:48 PM

This is a pleasure to read and re-read. Beautifully written and full of meaning.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2008-02-27 01:58 PM

Bruce, it is reassuring to know that

"our most precious dreams
are never truly lost"

and that they will

"linger instead
to dance forever…
on the far side of that
mystic moon!"

Love & Mystic Moon Light,

Linda

firestorm
Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 109

10 posted 2008-02-27 04:21 PM

Beautiful

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