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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2008-02-24 08:25 PM


I Have Loved You


the moon wears
your face
even when you
are not near
you are never far
the space of you
is between rain drops
from there
I can feel your heart
its rhythm
is inside my ears
constant consistent constant
I have loved you
in my silence
it is an indigo feeling
that surrounds
a cool warmth in touch
past the flaming point
of yellow red
to the place of burn


"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-24 08:44 PM


I have loved you
in my silence


too beautiful Helen... you have a lovely way you express your words... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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2 posted 2008-02-24 09:03 PM


it is an indigo feeling

You got that right!  I agree you have such a way of wording what could be an ordinary event, or feeling and making it so extraordinary.   Lovely Helen, now back to the Oscars

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-25 02:53 AM


How absolutely beautiful, dear Helen!!

Every word a gem.

love

Margherita

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4 posted 2008-02-25 03:32 AM


so gorgeous it makes my eyes tear up

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5 posted 2008-02-25 01:41 PM


"I can feel your heart"
TomMark
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6 posted 2008-02-25 02:21 PM


It is just wonderful that someone can make you write such a beautiful love poem. Always good.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-02-25 04:53 PM


Really like this...James
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8 posted 2008-02-29 11:58 PM


Sometimes when I read you, I want to wrap you in a hug and feed you the counterpoint of hot tea and ice cream; this was one of those times.




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9 posted 2008-03-01 06:11 AM


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Salutations

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2008-03-01 02:57 PM


Helen...Tender words indeed. Enjoyed...Paul

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Paul

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