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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-02-24 06:19 PM



     
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Lone violet hums Spring

in between heart to heart talk

scent of love reborn



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[This message has been edited by Margherita (02-26-2008 10:45 AM).]

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1 posted 2008-02-24 06:21 PM


I, for one, can't wait for Spring to come this way...and for this last snow to melt


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-02-24 06:26 PM


Margherita... simply beautiful!!
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-24 06:29 PM


Dear Maureen, thank you for coming in here. Today we had the clear perception of Spring being in the air ... my husband brought me a single violet from the small garden at the entrance of our building. I have it here now in a tiny vase and its scent diffuses tenderly ...
Wishing you to feel Spring pervade you very soon!

love
Margherita

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-02-24 06:30 PM


Thank you dear Roniece!
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5 posted 2008-02-24 07:04 PM


Dear Margherita, This is such a lovely poem you got here. I love the picture, because it reminds of the season that is coming back soon. I love the color violet!, Thank you for sharing this lovely post with us Margherita,

Have A Wonderful rest of the day
Happy Almost spring lol  
ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-02-24 07:07 PM


I love your Haiku.  Such simple beauty.
Pleasing to the mind and the heart!

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7 posted 2008-02-24 07:28 PM



Maga Margheria

"scent of love reborn"



Angelo Terrestre

Your hubby is quite the romantic!

simon
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8 posted 2008-02-24 07:28 PM


Margherita,

this is a beautiful haiku.

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9 posted 2008-02-24 07:29 PM


i can't wait intill spring. i have a whole bunch of violets in my yard. and i can't wait to see them bloom. great haiku!!

~Zach~  



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10 posted 2008-02-24 08:38 PM



You are patiently waiting for Spring over there Margherita, and we, here in Aussie'

are waiting for Autumn. They are both wonderful seasons. I loved your poem.

Lindsay

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11 posted 2008-02-26 03:38 AM


My honey told me its snowing in Chicago today...I called her a snow bunny...James
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12 posted 2008-02-26 06:02 AM


ms mar, lovely work, enjoyed it
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13 posted 2008-02-26 09:34 AM


Good Afternoon, beautifully descriptive
Haiku, fits your Image perfectly.

Kindest Regards Slim.

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bright and beautiful!
Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2008-02-26 09:37 AM


Margherita,

This is cute.  I'd make the words black, so they are easier to see.

Bobby

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16 posted 2008-02-26 10:29 AM


There another exsample why evryone loves you
Margherita
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17 posted 2008-02-26 10:47 AM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends for your loving replies!
love
Margherita

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18 posted 2008-02-26 12:42 PM


Just beautiful. my dear lady!!
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19 posted 2008-02-26 01:40 PM


love your violets...beauty standing tall
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20 posted 2008-02-26 01:58 PM



~Margherita~

~Fantasmatical
Love the flowering Haiku
So suited to you~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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21 posted 2008-02-26 03:22 PM





Purple petals blue

Summer wants to come kiss you

Save your scent for me




Margherita,

Thank you for the inspiration!!!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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22 posted 2008-02-26 04:43 PM


fine poem, grand photo. imagery (and 'comment/replies') as well!

applause!!

Margherita
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23 posted 2008-02-26 05:13 PM


Thank you dear Tom, LeeJ, Marge, Karilea and Bruce for your beautiful replies and for the highly appreciated haiku creations!

love
Margherita

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24 posted 2008-02-26 06:15 PM


So enjoy your flower inspiration!!

Hugs, Robert

Margherita
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25 posted 2008-02-27 06:08 AM


Thank you dear Robert.
love
Margherita

Margherita
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26 posted 2008-02-29 02:50 AM


Thank you dear Robert!
love
Margherita

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27 posted 2008-02-29 09:26 AM


From my yard:

Iris in morning
lift purple heads from winter,
contrast with blue sky.


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