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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-02-24 03:07 PM

The Nature Of Gifts

Pledge and lines strung up in lights
Cannot match the spectral heights
Right tones tale, discard and fail
As pretty pictures pale, unto time

Fleet and fickle wishes spent
Flesh and flash as well relent
Trinkets bound of cash flow streams
Disturb and cheapen changing dreams
That one true thought itself esteems

The heart so chained may not be true
Its restless struggle will imbue
Its purpose but to carry life beats forth
As all and every being has its worth

For once engrained in mind and soul
Forever rings one bell to toll
And given over all control and cause
A gift withstanding life and even loss
This gift of love endures at best, because

Copyright Kkh 2/24/08

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-24 03:14 PM

Beautifully Penned TD!

ARCTIC WIND

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2008-02-24 03:29 PM

Kathleen~
You are completely word lovely on this day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2008-02-28 10:49 PM

WOW, I love this one!!!!!!!!!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-02-29 08:01 AM

The heart so chained may not be true
Its restless struggle will imbue
Its purpose but to carry life beats forth
As all and every being has its worth

No doubt you speak truth in captivating words, dear TD.

Exquisite!

Love,
Margherita

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2008-02-29 09:32 AM

I love the flow of this, TD...the rhythm occuring so naturally that it sings. Lovely and meaningful.

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

6 posted 2008-02-29 10:14 AM

the rhythm is so catching i wonder if i have lost the deeper meaning of this great poem! i like:
For once engrained in mind and soul
Forever rings one bell to toll

clever talks delay friendship!

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

7 posted 2008-02-29 10:44 AM

TD, Now this is what I have been missing..Quality work, thanks for posting

John

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