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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-02-23 02:31 PM






~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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1 posted 2008-02-23 02:45 PM


very profound, my dear lady!!!!
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2 posted 2008-02-23 02:53 PM



Oh, so interesting ... I just got an email back from a friend who wrote -
"Wow!  That could be a tribute to Drew Peterson!!!  (and Scott Peterson too!)"

I hadn't thought of that .... but makes sense, now doesn't it?

Thanks, Bao~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2008-02-23 02:59 PM


Marge Tindal-

Chilly write! lol

I am soo cold now because I read this lovely poem!

Hot coco, here i come..

ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2008-02-23 04:11 PM


Excellent!!!

Eric

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5 posted 2008-02-23 04:36 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Marge!
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6 posted 2008-02-23 04:53 PM


Words of wisdom give this chilling beauty a point to ponder.  Thanks for sharing this truth with us, Marge.

  God bless,

  Rae

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7 posted 2008-02-23 05:52 PM


Doesn't sound like warm natured you.  What could it mean?  Joyce
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8 posted 2008-02-23 10:30 PM


This give me chills just looking at the berg! It's incredible so much lies unseen............usually anyhow.........beneath the sea. The poetry is luminous!

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2008-02-24 02:20 AM


Wow, Marge, haven't seen this side of you.
poets are so complicated.
                                   Ida

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10 posted 2008-02-24 02:39 AM


Dear Marge, this is profound in more than one sense! The picture already transmits chill though through beauty, but the words enhance the feeling. Anger is a killer, this is a tremendous truth.
It is important that we transform this killer into inner peace, otherwise it "eats" us.

But you say it is a blast from the past, so I don't worry.

Tremendous impact! Extremely well done, dear Marge.

love and warm hugs
Margherita

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11 posted 2008-02-24 08:48 AM



So glad to have been able to share this with new friends~

I had actually written this years and years ago~
Someone had sent me that graphic of an iceberg ... it just 'spoke' to my ink~

The 'blast from the past' really simply means that I "reposted" it~

A new acquaintance sent it to me the other day and it reminded me of the fact that I had written one .... I decided to "re-up" it~

I think that it does speak to the fact that there are many out there that show only one face to the world, while underneath the surface they harbor chilling thoughts that are not productive and are often very destructive~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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12 posted 2008-02-24 09:53 AM


Quite chilling Marge
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13 posted 2008-02-24 10:01 AM


Brrr *shiver* I dont like the cold. But wait whats that I see AHHH more snow!!!! LOL

*Quickly Zach go get something warm to drink Oh i know Hot coco!!!! LOL* nice write  

~Zach~  



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14 posted 2008-03-01 02:44 PM


Marge,

I saved this one to my library.  It is amazing.  I am a bit speechless and overwhelmed.

Alison

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15 posted 2008-03-01 03:35 PM


Marge,

I don't know how I missed this one.  It very nice.

Bobby

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16 posted 2008-03-01 08:57 PM



You have done it again Marge, a wonderful

expressive poem. I just loved it.

Lindsay

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