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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2008-02-28 09:02 PM


Entropy

A day like today found you
Shirtsleeves to the wind, waiting on the sun
The banter of my calmer mind clears its throat
Miming the elite spur of your mocha voice
All around my thoughts you linger
Warm, as angora arms that soothe the wrinkled day
I’m missing you, my love

The reasons flake upon snow covered winter
Unimportant and small as the time between seasons
There is not worry or alarm, but concern and caring
Between our two hearts, tuned to an invisible frequency
Spring writhes in its awaking, tugging in torrents my blood
Warm, as angora arms that soothe the wrinkled day
I’m missing you, my love

Copyright Kkh 2/28/08


© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2008-02-28 10:14 PM


Enjoyed the poem!

ARCTIC WIND

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2 posted 2008-03-01 10:13 AM


This is too good to be sitting here motionless.
poddarku
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india
3 posted 2008-03-01 10:34 AM


beautiful words.
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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4 posted 2008-03-01 10:51 AM


I love this very much. Beautiful.

Love the expression
as angora arms that soothe the wrinkled day

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-03-01 07:09 PM


Awesome in its soft melancholy, dear TD!!

love
Margherita

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