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Open Poetry #42
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2008-02-23 11:11 AM


The brown face
With the size of her hair
Lowering its shade bestowed
Like her mothers eyes
Seeing her pose
Against the white corridor,

With her fastened
Buttons above her red played v-neck sweater
As her shoulders lowered
Like a child underneath a faucets wake,

Without her wrinkles,
Still dreaming of the bridges shade
The day her family lulled
Her childhood with the sea’s brazen

White gowns promise.
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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-02-23 03:09 PM

how lovely and beautiful!!!
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