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Something vast

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Margherita
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Eternity


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from http://hubblesite.org/

*

Something vast
stirs within me.
Invisible hands marshal
far away streams
of cosmic energy
to flood my heart
as a limitless ocean.

Iím an overflowing
vessel urged to spiral
in sudden need
out of this room
into open space
where light speed
freeways wait.

Your Spring voice
incites me to dance,
soaking my veils
in your fragrance.
The floodgate breaks
and love magma
shoots forth
supernova like.

Hot fluids
gush over you,
making you stop
out of the blue,
wondering about
the persistent calling
of secret passion
routes.

Revealed by
unknown sender,
you tuck this
inundation into the
vastness of your soul,
where you can dip
your heart fingers
anytime.

No need to carry
a shield of recognition,
for I will forever
know the source
of my desire
and find my way
to your core,
just by riding the sparks
of your smile.
*

© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 02-23-2008 08:29 AM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Margherita,

This shows a lot of imagination, and excellent use of the language.  I enjoyed it loads.

Bobby  
Margherita
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2 posted 02-23-2008 08:32 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you dear Bobby! The "flooding" was very real, I feel the "flow of energy" through my chakras and yes then ... I FLY!

My motto is "Keeping my feet firmly in the air!" (my way of surviving ...)

hugs
Margherita
poddarku
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3 posted 02-23-2008 08:39 AM       View Profile for poddarku   Email poddarku   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poddarku

the energy you have shown in the writing is breath taking. i know the feeling. hence you are speaking of me. i am adding this to the library.

clever talks delay friendship!

Fareed
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4 posted 02-23-2008 08:45 AM       View Profile for Fareed   Email Fareed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fareed

Margherita,

This is so mature piece of liberal verses, that makes me dream
Margherita
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5 posted 02-23-2008 09:06 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you Poddar, I'm happy you FELT this one!

Thank you Fareed, enjoyed your comment! Dream on, as a Poet needs to do!

love
Margherita  
Earth Angel
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Maga Margherita, my dear soul sister, I am saving this faster than you can say "cosmic dynamism"! I have tucked so many of your treasures into my personal trove of poetic gems, that you will soon be charging me. ~ but that would be okay, because they are all worth it. In fact, if they were compiled into books of poetry, I would purchase all of them! ~ Seriously speaking!

Sounds like your birthday was stellar! lol

Love to you, Senorita Margherita

Angelo Terrestre


Artic Wind
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7 posted 02-23-2008 11:15 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Very Lovely Margherita!

I really love this one sooo much!

off to the library you go..

ARCTIC WIND
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 02-23-2008 11:28 AM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Your mind is limitless, as is your poetic heart.
Marchmadness
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9 posted 02-23-2008 11:59 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Ahhh... Pisces imagination, none like it.
I so love that last line.
                                Ida
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10 posted 02-23-2008 12:03 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

So many of your poems have involved the loveliness, and mystic, of what all we do not know of space. And you bring your thoughts to the core of it all.

Brava!

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 02-23-2008 01:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar..you do the sky of sighs so lovely, enjoyed this
Ericc
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12 posted 02-23-2008 04:12 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Beautiful!!!

Love,
Eric
Margherita
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13 posted 02-23-2008 07:01 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I had written already a reply to each of you, then the whole text disappeared as I had put several (too many) smilies in it.  Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr  Ö so there will be only the final smile, this time.

Dear Linda Angel, soul sister (I love that, yes), thank you so much for the loving words. We are each otherís fan, thatís great. As for the books, I am sure you will publish before me, you have so much wonderful material, also for children! Looking forward to this.

Dear Arctic Wind, thank you for saving it in your library. You please me.

Dear Kathleen, thank you so much. We all do have limitless minds, but sadly we are not always profiting from this beautiful truth.

Dear Ida, thank you, yes I love to fly along with my Pisces imagination!

Dear Karilea,  thank you for your very special comment!

Dear DS, thank you so much for coming in here to read.

Dear Eric! Thank you for the gift of coming back! Itís such a joy.

Love
Margherita
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 02-24-2008 04:31 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

No need to carry
a shield of recognition,
for I will forever
know the source
of my desire
and find my way
to your core,
just by riding the sparks
of your smile.

oh I love this Margherita!!!!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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15 posted 02-24-2008 06:06 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice....James
Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 02-24-2008 08:39 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Wonderful writing my friend.  LOVELY
Margherita
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17 posted 02-24-2008 03:41 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you dear Roniece, dear James and dear Donna for telling me you liked it. Enjoyed your replies.

love
Margherita
Earl Brinkman
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18 posted 10-13-2010 05:38 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

Margherita, you do radiate with love and joy!
Margherita
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19 posted 10-13-2010 10:12 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Dear Earl, thank you for unearthing this one and for your loving reply. I am surprised myself about the energy here after rereading it!

Love,
Margherita
 
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