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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-02-23 04:31 AM


Sandy Beach Dreams

Walking onto the beach
he would have minded
his own business
if those Australian girls
didn't look so fine,
so when the girl in the
string bikini tripped him
he fell right into the arms
of the one he had in mind.
Daytime conversations
took them into a
pleasurable direction,
and their tanned bodies
found themselves in embrace
as they went into the night.
And the smiles upon their
faces shined brightly in
the soft glow of moonlight.

JamesLee
23February
2008

Inspired by Roniece's
"Boulevard of Dreams".



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-23 04:35 AM


smiles....!!  ooh my !!  you were inspired by one of my poems sweet James? How lovely is that!  I love this - your words are wonderful and vivid!!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-02-23 08:32 AM


James,

Oh yeah! I like this loads.  Been there, done that.

Bobby

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-23 08:34 AM


Yep, that was a great source of inspiration.
Very lovely, James!

love
Margherita

poddarku
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4 posted 2008-02-23 08:43 AM


i am imagining hmmm...how is it ! this is a good one.

clever talks delay friendship!

HopeS
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5 posted 2008-02-23 09:39 AM


I live near a beautiful Aussie beach James , but have not wore a string bikini for a few years LOL


Hope

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-02-23 10:07 AM


Walking onto the beach.."

I love Beaches!

ARCTIC WIND

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7 posted 2008-02-23 10:12 AM


"Daytime conversations
took them into a
pleasurable direction,
and their tanned bodies
found themselves in embrace
as they went into the night.
And the smiles upon their
faces shined brightly in
the soft glow of moonlight."

I can just imagion of what that means or what comes next LOL!!!! God ,you sure do have a way with words LOL!!! great poem anyway.

~Zach~  



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2008-02-23 04:08 PM


Thank you Roniece, Robert, Margherita, poddarku, hope, Artic Wind, and Falling rain for the wonderful responses...
Especially you Roniece for the inspiration...your poem "Boulevard of Dreams" resonated with me and drew me in...James

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-02-24 06:05 PM


A dream vacation for any man!

Now, if it was only that easy at beaches back home!


Linda

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2008-02-24 06:32 PM


Very Nice, JamesM.

I'm ready for summer and a visit to a beach!

M

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2008-02-24 08:02 PM


Thank you Earth Angel and nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses...almost every day is a good beach day over here...James
LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-02-24 08:56 PM



How lucky can you be. great wright James

Much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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