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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2008-02-22 04:27 PM




The dreamy softness of a summer night:
a clear sky,
a full Moon,
a brilliant canopy of stars ...
the eerie glow of fireflies dancing ...


Clap for the Wolfman.
He's gonna reach a record high! ...


I'm riding in the back seat of a car,
a convertible, top down,
the wind blowing in my hair,
listening to the speaker just behind me.
The program or the show,
perhaps a sequence of oldies,
like those nationally syndicated programs
one may hear on a Saturday night,
is most interesting,
as if it had been put together
just for me,
as though its producer knew exactly
what I wanted to remember,
as if to bring me
a treasure of experience
from the past;
though I know all the while
this couldn't be the case,
that this is just a Westwood One radio illusion,
that it is all canned,
that it's really just a marketing tool,
a commercial gimmick
to get you to listen to the show.
With every moment
I am more and more
captivated and enthralled.
Suddenly the music stops.
The driver indicates
that I should talk into the speaker.
I am puzzled and say: Talk ... What? ...
I suppose that he (the driver)
has done this through his car phone.
That he's just telephoned the show.
A woman's voice emerges from the speaker,
The DJ, I suppose.
She says I'm now connected
to the all night dance party
and coast to coast red hot hotline
and what do I wanna hear?
I ignore it, then with a start,
I realize she's speaking directly to me.
But this couldn't be ... ...
It has to be some gimmick ...
Like they want to get your reaction
when the nurse on General Hospital
shows up at your door
and says could you please do her a flavor? ...
But that compelling, female voice ...
Her name, she says is Lori,
and in the same breath,
tells me she is forty.
She says can I tell her of myself.
She says We can talk,
and then I realize what this is.
They're just collecting demographic data
on their listeners.
It's  a marketing tool,
something like Arbitron.
They want to jack up their ratings.
Lori says that she is glad I'm listening,
and she is glad to know we are in arms.
Then she emerges from the speaker
and falls into the seat beside me.
In her arms she holds a magic boom box.
This is what I thought
to be a radio station.
I can't describe it. She lets me hold it.
It is smooth, large and heavy,
It's top is festooned with panels, dials and buttons.
It's one of those pieces of equipment
that randomly mixes songs for you,
moments for you,
plays the snapshots of your life for you,
The times of sadness,
the times of rapture and of glory.
How could this box, this girl,
already know so very much about me?
I feel a fascination with this box
so indescribable, so compelling, so intense
I can not say it,
only feel it.
But, of course, the box is her's
and she is going.
Then she just gives me her magic box,
and I am more startled by this
than by anything I've ever held
in my two grimy, little hands.
Why is she even letting me tamper
with her very, very valuable equipment?
I try to draw Experience from the box,
but can not make it do
what she can make it do.
The system must be locked with a password,
her password ...
and why would she give
her secret password out
to just whoever?
Then, before I can even formulate the thought,
she opens one of the many secret panels
on the box.
And then she gives me
the supper secret password.
She reveals a teeny tiny keyboard,
its tinny buttons and a menu:
asdfghjkl;' ...
and then Lori is gone.
But why would she just give me
her valuable ... her secret ...


A man takes my hand and indicates to me.
A woman is approaching,
her arms already open to receive me.
Touching her, I sense her intention.
I ask her who she is but can not hear her.
She is advancing.
I ask her who she is. Again she tells me.
Again, I can not hear her;
she advances.
She will not wait.
The distance closes and our bodies come together.
She takes me in her arms,
and, since there seems so little else to do,
I open to receive her
in my own.


The dreamy softness of a summer night:
a clear sky,
a full Moon,
a brilliant canopy of stars ...
the eerie glow of fireflies dancing ...

Clap for the wolfman.
Clap for the Wolfman.
Clap for the Wolfman ... ...
fade ... ...
a symphony of crickets ...
Everyone knows what soft
and dreamy summer nights are for ...
:-------)!


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Jaime Fradera
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Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
1 posted 2008-02-22 04:38 PM


Any Lori out there who is forty?
I dream of you!
I wait impatiently ...
eager to take you in my arms
and love you ...
even if you are already over forty!

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-02-22 05:59 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

MJ
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3 posted 2008-02-22 07:27 PM


Enjoyed the nostalgia of this...nice read.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-02-23 04:18 PM


Creative and interesting...smooth silky flow...the wolfman reminds me of a radio guy called "Wolfman Jack" that used to do a radio show in California...a wolfs howl was a part of his opening...James
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2008-02-23 06:59 PM


When I saw the title I immediately thought of the song and it brought back old memories.  

I enjoyed your poem Jaime.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-23 08:06 PM


Thank you, Jaime for bringing back some "soft
and dreamy summer nights" of my own. Awww, such sweet memories!

~ But a brand new summer is coming with new memories to be made!

Enjoyed this very much!

Hugs to you,
Linda ~ Unfortunately, I'm just Linda ~ not your dream girl Lori! lol

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7 posted 2008-02-23 08:33 PM


Jaime

I can't describe how I feel when I read some of your poems.  It is surreal and like time is captured and slowed down.  It's a wonderful feeling.

Alison

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-02-23 08:36 PM


Jaime Fradera,

This is a good story.  I enjoyed reading it.

Bobby

TomMark
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9 posted 2008-02-23 09:17 PM


enjoyed too!!
Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
10 posted 2008-02-24 07:25 PM


Hi Ali ...
Thank you for responding to my poems.  I hope they aren't tupsetting ...
Most of them are taken from nocturnal dreams.  They come to me in my sleep.  This is  NOT unusual.
Mostly I do not have to compose the stories.  They just come to me and I just relate, spellcheck and post them.
Them seem just as new or strange to the reader as they may be to be.  It is I wait each night for the next "movie" without having any idea what will be presented next
This is not unusual but it often makes going to sleep fascinating and taking naps fun.
It may be like watching television without benefit of TV Guide so you have no idea what is going to be presented next.
again I hope my dream poems don't upset.
Maybe Wolfman Jack will come tome again.
Maybe Ali or muskegs or mosquitos!
I don't know what I will dream this week but I will write it up for you!

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