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Tomer
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0 posted 2008-02-22 12:22 PM



The snow never tried to touch her
With the way faces walk and talk amongst one another,
The way our eyes turn up at the sight of night
Without a whispered scowl
Or the thought that night writes our bodies
Instead of a christened body, paging our skins
And alas, we are shallows fallen grim,

Reservoirs of words dipping from our lips
Lunging a tape softened rift
Through an idea of hopeful serenity,
A hopeful truth that works
Despite all the moments awkward lies,

Despite the birth of social ties,
We run around them,
Hoping and dashing,
Leaning so triumphantly
That plays don’t write our dying words,
Like religions that don’t purge their unneeded thoughts,

We run, I run,
To the warmest hill
Of a mysteries dark sun.


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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-02-22 01:05 PM


love the read.
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2 posted 2008-02-22 01:05 PM


good job!

~Zach~  



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