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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-02-21 10:26 PM

Girl says: "I'll always wait for you my dear..
            Along the moonlight I will wait
            Without you I fear
            the clutches of your Fate"

The Sailors voice echo's in her head

Sailor says: "I'm lost at sea
              Im sorry my dear
              We will never be
              What has happen i have fear...

              My soul is lost and never coming back
              I long to be with you
              But my body is what lacks
              I want to be with you, really i do"

The girl looks out to the sea to notice the ship

Girl says: "I'll do whatever it takes
            I'll sell thy soul for a price well fed
            Oh for Christ's sake!
            Please take me instead!

Sailor says: "Please my love this will never be
              My soul is lost, as you can see
              You cannot come to rescue me
              Ah my darling, my soul is not free

              Its trapped on this ship
              Among thee crew
              My heart is now ripped
              This is my burden...If only you knew"

The ship crashes among the waves in the pale moonlight

Girl says: "But I will forever miss
            you and all the time we've had.
            What i'd give to give you one last kiss
            Forever i will be sad"

Salior says: "Don't miss me my dear
              I'll forever remember you
              I do not fear
           Please dont forget me for i will not you"

The last words of the salilor echo in her head.

Girl Cries out: "No! please no!
                 Dont leave me!

The girl runs down from the rocks down to the beach. Wadeing in the waves, her tears begain to over flow
The ship begains to sail into the distance. While the waves crash among the shore a faint voice in the distance cry out.

          "I'll never forget you... I love you...."

Then the ship is gone never to be seen again. The girl left in the pale moonlight with tearsdrops falling to the sea.

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This poem was supposed to be told like a story. Hope you like it!

~Zach~

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-02-23 12:43 PM

Zach,

This is a nice story. Do try and remember to always capitalize you first person singular pronoun "I".

Bobby

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

2 posted 2008-02-23 07:04 AM

Enjoyed...

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