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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2008-02-21 09:14 PM


It must be hard work
To gather dead in the dark
Coroners still do.

Gloom


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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-02-21 10:27 PM


Interesting Write!

ARCTIC WIND

MJ
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2 posted 2008-02-21 11:30 PM


So brief, and yet it makes one appreciate those who deal with grim reality.
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2008-02-22 03:43 PM


Oh, I like this.  The brevity of a haiku suits the subject matter-makes it stronger.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2008-02-22 03:46 PM


good one! ['Grim' but true!]
simon
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5 posted 2008-02-22 03:46 PM


Loved it! I do love a good haiku...
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-02-22 05:54 PM


Death is natural
its cold face hurts those alive
but stirs compassion



Everything can be seen in more than one way.
It must be hard no doubt though!

very good!

love
Margherita


Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2008-02-22 05:56 PM


LOL, you just had to do it, didn't you!
Grim reaper write....

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2008-02-22 05:59 PM


cool one
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