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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2008-02-21 07:34 PM


Shivers

Soft lamp, easy chair
Hard bound in hand
Cradled in solitude
Verse takes command
All form of emotion
Course through my veins
Words strike an offence
I freely let reign
Attacking my psyche
In metered phrase
Surging then drawing me
Within its maze
Shivers cascading
The length of my spine
A moment, a lifetime
Digesting each line



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1 posted 2008-02-21 07:40 PM


yes!

this reminds me I have a book waiting for me to read....

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2 posted 2008-02-21 07:43 PM


I've finished two books in the past month, and am FINALLY...and I say it with glee, for the first time ever, delving into East of Eden.

They say you need to read, to write. It works.



Thank you for this, Brian!


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3 posted 2008-02-21 08:04 PM


great to read you again, Brian!
Yes, few things compare to holding a good 'siver' book while curled in an easy chair.  

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4 posted 2008-02-21 09:17 PM


Very Wonderfully Penned !

Enjoyed your Write

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5 posted 2008-02-21 09:38 PM


Good writing, Brian. Enjoyed
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6 posted 2008-02-22 10:54 AM


Brian

this  is really good, I look forward to you posting again


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7 posted 2008-02-22 11:19 AM


Brian, it is SO very good to read you again and with such a wonderful write...It just flows down the page and holds an universal truth in the words.  Thank you for the pleasure, sir.
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