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Open Poetry #42

Dragon's last flight

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-02-21 02:01 PM

Scales of red, Eyes of green
Fire of red, Claws of green
Wings of flight, Lay dormant
Water falling quietly,
Finale Flight,
Finale Fight,
Blood clouding the vision,
Teeth dripping red,
Voices a blur,
The worlds drifting,
Then,
Pit Patter of water on the ground,
Then,
Blackness taking over,
Then,
Silence

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-21 02:06 PM

OUU!

Chilling Write! Very Cool!

ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-02-21 02:12 PM

KatKali,

The odd and erratic capitalization of this makes it difficult to read. Don't capitalize after comma, unless it a proper name. Otherwise, it’s fun.

Bobby

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