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Sir_Vampire
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0 posted 2008-02-21 09:30 AM



With the suns first morning light,
My heart is a flutter, ever so slight.

On the breeze a scent is carried, amidst the dew.
This scent I know, so crisp so warm, the scent of you.

I close my eyes to take it remember this feeling.
The embrace of the breeze, to whisper your name is so appealing.

I part my lips to utter the words close to my heart.
For that is where you lie even though we drift apart.

I whisper your name, barely those few letters did I find.
And slowly open my eyes, yet the tears in them hold me blind.

I close my eyes once more and whisper your name yet again.
And my heart beats still, waiting for a reply… waiting in vain.

The wind dies away and my mind goes astray,
Yet another sunset alone, yet I again am alone this day.

My mind doubts that which has just taken a hold of me.
But my hearts knows with each beat it whispers your name.

I live in hope that this will not be just a thought, a dream.
I live hoping this won’t be an illusion any longer than it seems…

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2008-02-21 10:16 AM


stunning love story...beatiful write
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2 posted 2008-02-21 01:49 PM


SirV~
Such a lovely *sigh* of thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-21 02:04 PM


Beautifully Written!

ARCTIC WIND

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2008-02-21 05:36 PM


Beautiful write, filled with longing. Nicely done, Sir V.
TomMark
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5 posted 2008-02-23 02:54 PM


wonderful!! so sweet a romance. Ah, sigh!!!
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6 posted 2008-02-23 02:57 PM


lingering revelation.
Nice

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