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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2008-02-20 09:07 PM



~*~

Quiet fits me well
as I know my own story
Now, please, tell me yours.

~*~

© Copyright 2008 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2008-02-20 09:11 PM


ahhha but my story isn't finished yet..


LindsayP
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2 posted 2008-02-20 09:49 PM



But Sunshine you have to tell a little of your own story first, and I'll bet it is an

interesting one. I'm sure we would all like to read it. Take care and God bless.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-02-20 09:54 PM


Sunshine,

I, and many others would enjoy reading your story.  Don't be a clam.

Mouthy Bobby

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4 posted 2008-02-20 09:58 PM


When you tell your story first, i'll tell you mine . And i really want to hear your story so please tell!!!

~Zach~

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
5 posted 2008-02-21 08:21 AM


Well...once upon a time...  Really, though, listening sometimes is the greatest gift we can give.
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
6 posted 2008-02-21 08:41 AM


My story is sorrow,
My life is

Gloom

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7 posted 2008-02-21 09:10 AM


SunShine-

But there is so much to know lol

ARCTIC WIND

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8 posted 2008-02-21 04:20 PM


I would love to hear your story. My story is a bit of a bumpy road but I wouldn't mind sharing some of the bumps.
                                Ida

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9 posted 2008-02-21 04:51 PM


I'll share mine, if you share yours....

every body, has a story...

Hugs
Lee J.

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10 posted 2008-02-21 05:02 PM



~*~
A simple story
is all that I have to share.
Know me, through my words.
~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2008-02-21 05:08 PM


this is very fine...particularly the 1st. line!

My 'story' is simple...I have 'suffered grandly'
(particularly in those 'matters of the heart') and
(hopefully) that has seriously helped mold me
into a far better 'poet' and human being?!  I
suppose that quote "in order to 'write grandly,'
one must 'suffer grandly!" is considered cliche?...
however, I believe it holds serious merit nevertheless!

applause for this 'penning!'

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2008-02-21 06:07 PM



If to do again
a life not worth repeating
unless loving lasts

brianbeaudry
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13 posted 2008-02-21 07:30 PM


My life is an isle
With each friendship as a bridge
Keeping me anchored

MJ
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14 posted 2008-02-22 12:31 PM


Quiet fits me too
In poetry we might be
Silent companions

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2008-02-24 05:50 AM


quiet may suit you
but words speak volumes...

you always are so lovely with yours... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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Eternity
16 posted 2008-02-24 06:05 AM


A heart to embrace
to fill with whispers divine
with each new sunrise



Every day the story continues.
Enjoy always the sparkling hints of you, dear Karilea.

love and hugs
Margherita

Dee
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17 posted 2008-02-25 04:02 AM


In answer to your so nicely asked question.


My (new) Life

A blank page
on which to start again
No history
only a future
as fulfilling
as I chose to make it.

Dee

Gumpy
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18 posted 2008-02-26 06:19 PM


Lived...Loved...Laughed...lost...

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

Alison
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19 posted 2008-03-01 09:22 PM


My story is short
there is not much to tell you
I love day to day

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