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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-02-20 05:01 PM


             

Mother Nature's Rebirth

Whirling winds surround the land,
as the new buds start to form.
Mist rolls in from the melting snow,
and rain falls in springtime storm.

Crocuses push through the frozen earth,
and the sky turns a bright, shiny blue.
Winds are gentle and blowing warm,
and are turning the snow to dew.

The time has come, as it does each year,
when mother nature is reborn.
Spring awakens the beauty of her,
as she smiles and rises each morn.

ARCTIC WIND


Life isn't just given to you
Life is about creating it...
-Arctic Wind

© Copyright 2008 Arctic Wind - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2008-02-20 05:33 PM


Oh my, what a beautiful depiction...stunning
thank you
Lee J.

simon
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2 posted 2008-02-20 06:28 PM


Soon I'll never need to go anywhere, just stay in & read your poems. Your descriptive pieces are getting more & more vivid. Nice one.
Indigo
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3 posted 2008-02-20 06:30 PM


Arctic-
I can feel the sun's warmth and smell the fresh earth in your words. Lovely.

Indigo

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-20 06:42 PM


Leej-

Thank you for this wonderful reply

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-02-20 06:43 PM


Simon-

THANKS! lol

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-02-20 06:43 PM


Indigo-

WOW!

Thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-02-20 08:09 PM


Beautiful words and image. I, too think you are getting better with each write.
                                  Ida

Sunshine
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8 posted 2008-02-20 08:24 PM


I like that we're on the same page...

spring being what it is.

Well done, AW.




ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2008-02-20 09:31 PM


As lovely as she is~
LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-02-20 09:45 PM



A lovely picture and an even lovlier verse,

Well done my friend.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-02-21 10:01 AM


March Madness-

Thank you so much! I am so happy that people like my poetry. And they think i am writing better each time. I am sooo Happy that you liked my post!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-02-21 10:02 AM


Sunshine-

Yes! Isn't Spring just so beautiful.
I love spring so much, Not as much a winter, but it is up there

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-02-21 10:03 AM


TD-

Thank you very much

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-02-21 10:04 AM


Lindsay-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
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15 posted 2008-02-21 10:19 AM


Artic

You are like a fine wine & improving with time, I like this a lot....

John

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-02-21 11:52 AM


Effjayel-


WOW!-- Thank you so much!, I am so glad you that you liked it. I wrote it because Spring is coming soon! I love spring, All the flowers, scents, warmth, rain storms

Everything to do with it I LIKE!

Thank you so much

ARCTIC WIND

SEA
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17 posted 2008-02-21 06:56 PM


this is so lovely! and that picture is wonderful really looking forward to no snow...LOL
Artic Wind
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18 posted 2008-02-21 06:58 PM


SEA-

Yes Its been awhile since we seen her beauty in our planet. All the flowers and lovely things about her.

Me too, I love winter, but I kind of miss the warmth

Thank you reading my poem and taking the time to write to it!



ARCTIC WIND

Falling rain
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19 posted 2008-02-21 10:32 PM


Mother Nature is very amazing. And you painted a perfect picture of her and nature/spring. Your like the artist of poetry, Great work!!!! Your really improving! wish i could write like you lol

~Zach~

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-02-21 10:38 PM


Falling Rain-

WOW! I'm Flattered! lol

You write just fine...

ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
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21 posted 2008-02-21 10:53 PM


Artic Wind,

This s very nice.  We're wild for Spring here in Philadelphia too.  Spring is great here on our street.  For one thing, it's when new mothers get to show off there babies born in winter.

Bobby



Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-02-22 03:14 PM


Bobby-

Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2008-02-22 03:22 PM


Although I love the winter months, by the time winter is coming to an end, I am filled with anticipation for Mother Nature's rebirth. I love the smell of melting snow and get so exited when the buds begin to grow on the trees.

Your poem has heightened my anticipation for the coming spring! Thanks, AW!

Love & Spring Light,

EA

JamesMichael
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24 posted 2008-02-22 03:35 PM


wonderful...spring seems a long way off in Chicago...James
secondhanddreampoet
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25 posted 2008-02-22 03:45 PM


pleasant 'write!'

applause!!

Artic Wind
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26 posted 2008-02-22 06:00 PM


JamesMichael-

Thank you sooo Much!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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27 posted 2008-02-22 06:01 PM


EA-

Sorry I missed yah!

Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2008-02-22 06:02 PM


SHDP-

Thanks for the applause!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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29 posted 2008-02-23 09:23 AM


I greatly enjoyed your touch of Spring here, dear Arctic Wind! Beautiful, as is the picture.

This morning I can tell I have inhaled the scent of Spring too on my balcony, just perceived it in the air, even though the temperature was rather low still.

love
Margherita

Artic Wind
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30 posted 2008-02-23 10:24 AM


Margherita!

Thank you sooo Much!




ARCTIC WIND

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