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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
In you, I find a complexity of thought A maze of wonderment and a crashing down I could stay here forever, but I cannot Expect to give way so many hours to pleasure Or leisure to reason on the misfortune of truth Our own touch, too nearly much for words Too much a pure desire for more So, I may be in this to be free from you… Or is it to be your captive? |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Thoroughly enjoyed too... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The thoughts of true freedom, that which is unconditional, rang through me in your words. I smiled at "captive"... as being more nearly mesmerized. Enjoyed your beautiful write.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You weigh the evils, level the playing field, enjoy the rapture, and above all... delight in the fact you have choice, and free will. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
A prisoner of Love? I'll do life without parole ....like this Robert John "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I have often pondered this... Much enjoyed. K "Nothing is impossible. Some things are just less likely than others." Jonathan Winters |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such captivating ponderings! love Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"In you, I find a complexity of thought A maze of wonderment and a crashing down I could stay here forever, but I cannot Expect to give way so many hours to pleasure" loved this  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed! ARCTIC WIND |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed the convolutions. I vote with 'enjoy it while you've got it'.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful Robert! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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