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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india

0 posted 2008-02-20 10:49 AM



Mails


What time is it in U.S?
I am at this side of world
Bowed before roaring sea,
Thousands of miles in between,
My fingers fumble on keys.
Go ether! Carry my words
To a friend from timeless truth.

Waters of same shade currents,
Waves and waves commingles,
Nations obliterate in
The mist of minds sending mails
The truths change accordingly.


© Copyright 2008 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-02-20 11:13 AM


Pod

your writing is evolving and becoming more westernised I think, some are easier to grasp than others, for the most part this doe's not detract from the readers pleasure...I feel you may benefit from visiting the attached link. I hope you do not take this as an offence, I am just hoping you will take a look and play around a little?


http://www.wordanywhere.com/[/URL]  

Regards

John


"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-02-20 04:23 PM


I enjoyed this, dear Poddar! It conveys a new awareness of oneness. Mails are indeed a powerful means for feeling close.

Loved the imagery too.

love
Margherita

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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3 posted 2008-02-20 10:59 PM


Beautiful poem. Friendship is always wonderful, my dear friend.
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