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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2008-02-20 06:47 AM


you never did finish the willow
where the black lady showed you her jewels
and danced with ordinary statues

you said she was like an entree
with exotic flavors of many endings
and even more beginnings

but you didn't mind such things
since I brought you love stories
and another room with a window

where you could watch contributions
as they dangled their offerings
and never met the laughter of your eyes

when they were the syrup of our discussions

_______________

daark

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-02-20 09:09 AM


and never met the laughter of your eyes

when they were the syrup of our discussions




"The laughter of your eyes" ... now that is something I would like to see!!

Whether I find some meaning or not in your words, they still are music by their mere creative sound!

love
Margherita  


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2 posted 2008-02-20 10:25 AM


I do so love
a once upon a time morning
with my coffee, D.

Yep, she is a beauty.

A

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
3 posted 2008-02-20 10:36 AM


you said she was like an entree
with exotic flavors of many endings
and even more beginnings
_ i like the most engrossing lines.this is seer quality and so is the ending


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2008-02-20 11:26 AM


but you didn't mind such things
since I brought you love stories
and another room with a window

~*~

I imagine she didn't. Who could?






Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

5 posted 2008-02-20 12:47 PM


a troika works best
when one doesn't mind getting
pushed from the carriage.

But then who doesn't like to watch...?

Indigo

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2008-02-20 09:29 PM


I wouldn't mind such things either Mr Daark...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2008-02-21 06:20 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend for your read

______________


ms ali-san, thank you babe for watching her move her statues around

__________________

friend poddarku, thank you for the read
________________

ms sun, thanks babe for touching my pen here


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ms indi, would expect you to watch and offer options for the dialogue, thanks hon


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ms r & b, thank you for looking up from down under ms

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

8 posted 2008-02-21 02:54 PM


griz.  Yep, what the sunnylady said!
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2008-02-21 04:14 PM


Always A pleasure to Read Dark Stranger!



ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2008-02-21 05:35 PM


Nice...James
TomMark
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11 posted 2008-02-23 02:52 PM


very lovely!!
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