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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-02-19 08:13 PM

    Land of Lost Souls

A deep salmon sunset
from a wind-pierced dream,
tips sepia clouds in flaming
  amber,
over grand grey waves
crashing in the shadows,
where Winter sorrow sits
with time-shattered souls,
(beyond all rhythms of history
  and hope)
on the barren, rock-bound
shores of endless, forsaken
  love.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-02-19 09:25 PM

sad, sad, sad. A land of lost souls and forsaken love and full of sorrow.
I shall wait close eyed for the sunrise tomorrow.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-02-19 10:23 PM

Bruce, you painted this with splashing oils mixed with tears.

Beautiful.

Alison

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-02-19 10:25 PM

very interesting. For me its not that hard for me to picture such a land. this is a sad story to tell but someones got to tell it right?

~Zach~

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-02-20 08:41 AM

Bruce, you do this so well, I echo what Alison says & would add that I am beginning to think you write with a brush as opposed to a pen.....

John

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-02-20 09:09 AM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

Snap out of it Babe, look on the bright side.

BTW, well written poem.

Bobby

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

6 posted 2008-02-20 10:31 AM

A graceful hand and gentle heart give the kaleidoscope a quarter-turn, and we see eternal sadness new hues.

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

7 posted 2008-02-20 10:39 AM

the ambience is wonderful.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2008-02-20 10:41 AM

"brush instead of a pen" yes... that is exactly how you write

always so beautiful

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2008-02-21 03:54 PM

Yes, I agree, you are a poet/artist
and this is another masterpiece.
Ida

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-02-21 04:18 PM

tips sepia clouds in flaming
amber,
over grand grey waves
crashing in the shadows....."

I knew when I saw this part of the poem I was going to really enjoy it a lot, And guess what!, I did. Very beautifully penned SHDP!, I love the part in Flamming amber!

Thats flamming hot I bet lol

Thank you for the wonderful and Beautifully written Piece

ARCTIC WIND

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