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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-02-19 06:59 PM


Bits and Pieces, No Less Titled

You could never be forgotten
in the aftermath of love.
Never hollowed by the darkness,
nor abandonment, thereof.

In the tangle of the winter nights
remembering the dreams,
the alarms go off in old cliches
to riddle all that seems.

The last line of this tune belongs
to all who search to find
that words are filled beyond the need,
yet always there in kind.

You can field them in the ramblings of
or tag them as your own,
for tomorrow brings the smile of you
to fill the once unknown.


M

* bits of  titles, here and there~~borrowed


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2008 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-02-19 07:32 PM


Very nicely done, lady M!
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2008-02-19 07:36 PM


well done...interesting idea!

applause!!

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2008-02-19 07:37 PM


thanks, just trying to keep the  words flowing... as the cold weather hits us again.
I use titles every now and then Bruce...especially when I have  no feelings of my own to share.

M

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-02-19 08:03 PM


You are soooo good in assembling titles with your own words and creating something so beautiful!

love and hugs
Margherita

garysgirl
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5 posted 2008-02-19 08:46 PM


This is beautiful, M. I love these and
you did it so beautifully.
It was good to read you again.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2008-02-19 11:14 PM


I love it!

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2008-02-19 11:38 PM


Such a fine poetess you are Maureen~ Always have been, always will be.
I hope life has been kind to you while I've been gone.

Hugs~

Kristabell
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8 posted 2008-02-20 12:09 PM


Much enjoyed.

K

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
9 posted 2008-02-20 05:07 AM


So who's a clever girl then? Well put together & thought out, I ejoyed this a lot..Hope you are well

Cheers

John

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2008-02-20 07:45 AM


Margherita, thanks. Some days I just feel like writing but have nothing of my own to offer.


garysgirl, Thank you Ethel. I have missed reading your words on here.

Dixie hope your days are going well.

BluesSerenade,  so good to see your name here. If you'd like I would enjoy an email from you ( not sure yours is the same). I think of you often and miss you more.

Kristabell, thanks

effjayel Thank you John. It's always a  challenge to find other's words that can combine with mine, but also lots of fun.  I am finally over this flu and cough. Thanks again.

M

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2008-02-20 09:21 AM


thanks wordweaver
for bringing it all back home here

LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-02-20 11:12 PM



So beautifully put Maureen

A lovely poem, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Sunshine
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13 posted 2008-02-20 11:15 PM


Isn't it wonderful to play off of titles? Somehow, the most simple of moments glean a lifetime of being.

Smiling just now, wondering how my doll is coming along?

Yes, I know.

I've been sideswiped, too.



I miss you.


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