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vandana
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0 posted 2008-02-19 06:33 PM



Come on,
Listen to the song,
They are playing,
Come on,
Sing these words,
While your heart rings away
Come
And listen to the music
Sway
To the hearts of love,
Listen to the music,
The evening falls,
As the love calls,
During the night,
The music plays aloud
Winter night away,
To the music of love,
Listen to the song,
While we are here
Come on,
Dance
To the music
Let us sway
The music we play
Let us lay
our love
To the music of hearts



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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-02-19 06:45 PM


Yes, a very good song for my cloudy day.
enjoyed.

LindsayP
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2 posted 2008-02-19 07:04 PM



A great write Vandana, I can feel your

happiness shining through, much enjoyed.

A big hug for this one.

Lindsay

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-19 08:05 PM


You have a unique "musical" way to write of your love, dear vandana!

Lovely!

love
Margherita

garysgirl
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4 posted 2008-02-19 08:43 PM


Vandana, this is really good. I loved
reading it. I love music and I love your poem.
Hugs and God bless,
Ethel

effjayel
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5 posted 2008-02-20 08:30 AM


Vandana, You are obviously in tune with your inner self as can be seen here.....Good job

John


"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-02-21 03:49 AM


Enjoyed...James
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