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The Proposition of Composition
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The Proposition of Composition |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Proposition of Composition ~*Marge Tindal*~ He asked so softly, that I thought I had heard him incorrectly Then he took my hands and said to my eyes ~Please, please love me~ ~I am not free to love you~ for another tugs the strings of my heart But, oh if I were ever again free what music we could make I half-heartedly smiled, he turned to go and yet in turning, stayed ~I will wait for the music when will we compose?~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Marge, I love this very much! Sooooo beautiful! hmmm that was an enticing proposition!! Your charm makes lovely music! love and hugs Margherita  |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Clever. What a proposition indeed. Love this. K |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I don't know why, but I turned this into objects such as a piano, or a guitar, and of course the person caught without their musical muse in the middle. Anyway, whatever way you read this - it was lovely. I liked the idea applied to animate or inanimate. When you can read it several ways it is sheer poetry. Carpe' Diem |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lovely  you are tuggin on my heart today! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I said once, somewhere, that "I gotta hear the music" to write. And this is exactly what I was talking about. I think this is one of your best. But then, I'm not biased or anything.  I do believe this one makes you a "virtuoso".  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful!!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most excellent write! serious and sustained applause! [from this 'hopeless romantic'] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely poem Marge but the grass on the other side of the fence is not always as green as we might think, but it is nice to dream. Loved it Lindsay |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful Marge. I just love it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is such a beautiful poem of romance. I loved reading it. It's so good reading your work again. Thank you. Powered by CGISpy.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks to each of you~ As I was reminded, sometimes the words are not mine, but simply stop for a dip in my inking-well~ I do what I do with them, knowing that when I turn them loose they will hurry on to where they belong~ Such is the case with this one~  Don't ya' just LOVE being a poet ?? Me too~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very clever and also entertaining! I too do love being a poet! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSweetBettyLou~ It is ALWAYS good to see you ... but you know that~ Love you~ Hello MY RONNIE~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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