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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-02-19 08:53 AM



Torn pages

Torn pages from daily dreams and diaries.
They are all scattered on the blue carpet.
Pick up a piece and wet your palm
The color of blue digs deep roots within.

A Sunday is emptied out of an old box
A treasure and a ghost roam and their sighs
You can’t wipe, can’t wipe, from your fogging eyes.

Time lays loose and you shut in the old box.


© Copyright 2008 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
1 posted 2008-02-19 02:47 PM


my dear friend, I love to read your poem. But tell me now, this one, why the first S and second s are related?
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-02-19 05:39 PM


Enjoyed The Read

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-02-23 08:18 AM


Dear Poddar, just discovered this gorgeous write from a few days ago. I am glad I found it, because it is very captivating indeed!

love
Margherita

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