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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-02-18 10:20 PM



roulette of the gata
with her assets in temptation
like syrup on saliva

wicked with a could be look
casual is her part time dime
when she does those eyes

and coffee to the wire men
she makes a smile seem endless
nonchalant over the shoulder

innocent with that certain perfume
venus had it on too, before
when alex did her statue

and lost his mind in her embrace
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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-18 10:48 PM


smiles... well, my fragrance is Oscar de la Renta Mr Daark... I'll gladly wear some for you !  lovely gifting here ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-02-19 12:35 PM


beautifully lost.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-02-19 06:13 AM


ms r & b, thanks lady b for the eyes and smile

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friend TomMark, thanks guy...playing at a museum messes with my muse sometimes..grin

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4 posted 2008-02-19 07:39 AM


Yes, artists do lose their minds at times ... I saw "Caravaggio" on tv yesterday evening, what breathtaking beauty he created when he "lost his mind"!!

You reach untold heights when you get there ...

Btw, following Roniece's remark, I will say that I use "Be delicious" by DKNY, it won't be of any importance, but it could be fun if we shared our scent ...

love
Margherita

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5 posted 2008-02-19 10:47 AM


look at you...gettin the girls to spray their perfume for you...

enjoyed the coy of this...

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6 posted 2008-02-19 01:22 PM


the marble of her
chiseled to perfection by
the touch of his hand.

Indigo

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7 posted 2008-02-19 02:21 PM


like syrup on saliva

You must stay up all night dreaming up these visions - good for you!  

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8 posted 2008-02-19 10:38 PM


I don't know why I thought of this as I read this - but I flirt with the man who makes my espresso drinks first thing in the morning.  It just starts my day off with a lift.

I like this on many levels -- and you are so damned creative.

Maybe I am envious ... (smiles)

A

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9 posted 2008-02-19 11:41 PM


"she makes a smile seem endless
nonchalant over the shoulder"

The simplicity in that visual is breathtaking to me.

And here I said I'd never look back!

Hey D~ how you be?

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-02-20 06:32 AM


ms suesea...thanks babe...and what would you spray?  grin

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ms indi, thank you lady friend for looking in on this one

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ms mysteria, thanks for the glistening reply ms


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ms ali-san, he is lucky, thanks hon


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ms bluezy, have missed you babe, thank you for the eyes...send me a email?

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