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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2008-02-18 09:23 PM



Your heart is pure
in my eyes
Your love so precious
for me
Your lonely nights
and tears
do not go unnoticed
I leave you in silence
for you to hear
the answers
echoing within the shadows
I am here
With you always
I am your Savior
Your protector
Best friend
Find all that you seek in me
I comfort you
when no one else is around
I hold you when you fall down
Do not always seek
help from another
when it's me
I want you to run to
When things seem so far
Never doubt your purpose
I died for you
to breathe
to live
to love
and to receive
Our Father's love
You are not an accident
When you are lost
Remember
that no matter what
I'll always love you
and
you are Gorgeous!!!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2008 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-02-18 09:24 PM


With you always
I am your Savior
Your protector
Best friend..."

enjoyed your Poem C!

ARCTIC WIND


Life isn't just given to you
Life is about Creating it   ......
-Arctic Wind

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-02-18 09:46 PM


Nice...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-02-18 09:49 PM


Kristen.. lovely - loved the last line too!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison
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4 posted 2008-02-19 03:00 AM


I do so love your passion when you write.  Lovely work.

Alison

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
5 posted 2008-02-19 04:33 AM


Good job, enjoyed very much,  John
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-19 08:09 AM


It is highly apparent to me that this was a spontaneous, impassioned write! I could feel the energy and conviction!

Yes, Jesus DOES love you! And remember that He also said! ~ "You are GORGEOUS"!!!!!

Loved this!

Love & Christ's Light,

Linda

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2008-02-19 07:42 PM


Kristen, I adore this and the message it sends.  Lovely work here.
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2008-02-19 07:46 PM


wonderful
Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2008-02-19 07:48 PM


You are not an accident
When you are lost
Remember
that no matter what
I'll always love you
and
you are Gorgeous!!!


Very uplifting and bright!

love
Margherita

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