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LindsayP
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0 posted 2008-02-17 10:38 PM



              A Great Night Out

Thinking to surprise my wife when I suddenly hit upon a winner,
If you like to dress and look the part, I’ll take you out for dinner.
Her answer was a smiling face, so to a nice restaurant we will go,
My first idea was the local pub but it‘s a thought I must forego.

She said, let’s go somewhere nice where we can have a lovely meal,
A glass of wine while our thoughts entwine and our happiness we reveal.
Fairways restaurant we decide upon up the road from the Lancefield pub,
We’d been there a couple of times and we knew they served good grub.

Lynn the owner welcomed us and showed us to our seats,
I remember the last time we’d eaten here I backed up for repeats.
Norma started off with Chardonnay while I chose something sweeter,
It‘s a brand I always drink at home and I buy it by the litre.

Then we started off with pumpkin soup, the very best I’d ever tasted,
I scraped the bowl completely clean; not a single drop was wasted.
We peruse the menu up and down to decide on our entrée,
Mountain trout all braised in stout but fresh oysters won the day.

The drink waitress hovering close at hand quickly fills our glasses,
The quick attentive service offered here, few restaurants surpasses,
Main course time has finally come; the right choice is hard to make,
Grilled fish, roast pork with apple sauce or will we try their steak.

We don’t have very long to wait; the steaming plates are on the table,
To say you’re hungry leaving here must surely be a fable.
The roast pork melts within one’s mouth helped on by the grog,
The wife says, I can’t eat all my steak, I’ll take some home for the dog.

I’ve always much enjoyed my sweets but now the choice was great,
Pavlova, strawberries, apple pie but I finished up with sticky date.
The wife was battling to finish her’s, she said, I’ve over eaten,
But I finished off my sticky date, who said that I’d be beaten.

We finished off with coffee and cream and chocolates if you please,
In fact I felt so very full, I was very frightened that I’d sneeze.
And embarrassing tho’ the outcome might be, I made it safely to the loo
And glancing at my fuzzy watch I knew that home time was overdue.

We paid our bill, we’d had our fill, our thanks were most sincere,
We promised to come back again as the wife’s birthday was drawing near.
So we headed home satisfied and content from this enjoyable interlude,
The only regret was that we’d over indulged in all that glorious food.

                                                                                                      


© Copyright 2008 Lindsay P Wilson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-02-17 10:51 PM


If I hadn't made cookies today and sampled a few to many this would have made me very hungry.
                                Ida

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2 posted 2008-02-17 10:54 PM


Oh my! I should have eaten this ~ I mean "read"  this when I was hungry! I just finished a meal in which I over-indulged and I am stuffed! My daughter made her first homemade lasagna ~ and of course I had to show her how much I enjoyed it! lol

What a lovely meal and evening that you and your wife shared together. ~ and thank you for sharing it with us in such a sumptuous ~ and humorous ~ manner!

Loves 'n hugs,

Linda

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-02-18 05:18 AM


Fine writing...James
Margherita
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4 posted 2008-02-18 09:27 AM


Oh, Lindsay! I too have just come back from lunch, I have not over-eaten though, at least for a dessert there is still room ...

Enjoyed your lovely evening with your dear Norma very much!

love and joy
Margherita

simon
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5 posted 2008-02-18 09:49 AM


Very much enjoyed sharing your evening...
TomMark
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6 posted 2008-02-18 09:54 AM


very lovely!!!
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-18 10:21 AM


Enjoyed the Read Lindsay!

ARCTIC WIND

Rick
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8 posted 2008-02-18 12:43 PM


Hi Lindsay, sounds like you enjoyed the night out mate, enjoyed the read my friend, have a wonderful day.

Rick

effjayel
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9 posted 2008-02-18 12:50 PM


Lindsay, I enjoyed that almost as much as you did...


John

LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-02-18 06:24 PM



To my very good friends, Ida, Linda, James, Margherita, Simon, Tom, Arctic Wind, Rick

and John, thanks to all you kind folks for enjoying our meal with Norma and me. It

really was a good night out. Have a great day.

Lindsay

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11 posted 2008-02-19 02:42 AM


I wanted to be there too.  It all sounded so good and like so much fun.  

And, I AM hungry too.

A

HopeS
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12 posted 2008-02-19 11:21 AM


This all sounds so delicious


Hope

nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2008-02-19 07:42 PM


Sounds like a beautifully shared  evening.


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LindsayP
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14 posted 2008-02-20 11:39 PM



To my very good PIP friends, Alison, Hope

and Maureen, thank you dear folk for your

kind words. Much appreciated.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2008-02-23 04:42 AM


oooh yum!! I'm putting that pub on my list to visit Lindsay!     love Pumpkin Soup!!
RDB

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Earl Brinkman
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16 posted 2010-10-19 10:11 PM


An enjoyable night out that all can enjoy reading.
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