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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR

0 posted 2008-02-17 03:56 AM


On
10-24-07


Walking along the road to understanding
Denying and applying all that is seen

…And unseen…

Taking for granted floods of forever
And fine time, and nowhere
Seeking fresh foliage, a gleaming garden
Exploiting what fertile soil is there
Fogs of plunder stolen

…so discreetly…

Frigid winds and stormy sees
Fluttering fantasies and waterfalls brilliant
A self sufficient climate
A friend to serenity
Portrayal of the night sky
Between the here and now
Beyond what is lost

…and found…

Vines of contentment
Wrapped in lies
An empty land of despair

…for time to hide…

Sewing seeds of discord,
change is nigh
Descending from heaven’s gate
Flowery fresh, a discontinuous song

...and on…

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-02-17 04:59 AM


Your palette shows and conveys pretty much all the emotions a human heart can experience  ... ON!

Wonderful, captivating write, Kristabell!

love
Margherita

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-02-19 05:16 AM


Kristabell

I read this 3 times & it just gets better, it's going in the library.....

Thanks for sharing

John

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
3 posted 2008-02-19 01:55 PM


Thank you both of you. This one was a fun one.

K

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