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Raven Dreams |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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 Even ravens dream of summer, dripping in color Confetti dreams of butterflies and flowers Summer sun magically turning feathers to deep blue Treasures pilfered and shining under roosting trees Even ravens long for long nights, bright and warm Midnight sun warming raven beaks, feeding chicks Flying under blue skies, playing in wind currents Catching the breeze and soaring for simple joy Even ravens dream in color, erasing gray winter days Whispering stories of ancient raven rituals Laughing under fluffed up tucked-in wings Looking from lofty heights at inattentive humans And wonder if they are too busy to dream in color ... Alison [This message has been edited by Alison (02-17-2008 08:30 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, I kind of like the idea of pilfered treasures. I’ve got to get me some of those trained Raven dudes. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ravens are very intelligent, we had a pet raven when I was child. I think your poem captures the raven reality very well. Ida |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, Alison, great poem!  .......jo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Had a raven once...we lived in New Mexico. He LOVED beer! Would get drunk and walk right off the side of the porch without ever opening up his wings and go ka-plunk! on the ground. He'd just lay there on his back, or side or breast - whatever position he hit in - for about 10 minutes the get up and walk under the house and I wouldn't see him again till the next day. Loved that old bird. And the memory this piece brought to mind. j. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
who will be you lucky publisher? it is great. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
what a great write Ali.. I liked Jwesley's comment about his pet raven too  imagine seeing a bird drunk! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alison, this is another .... There now, it's saved! I'm notorious for forgetting to do that and having to come back in and post another reply to save it!  You are a delightful poetess! ~ creative, imaginative, talented ~ and I like the energy that you give off! It draws me in and keeps my attention. I love your poetry!!!  Giving you an extra BIG hug for this fine write. Linda |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is great. I love the new perspective here. K |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, Alison! MAGICAL! We have ravens here too in the town and I hear them in the morning. I use to count their crowing, because of something my Grandmother always said ... I love them, but I see less sparrows when they are around, don't know why. Your perception of nature's and wildlife's beauty is exceptionally profound and COLORFUL! love and hugs Margherita [This message has been edited by Margherita (02-17-2008 07:29 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, they say the raven is the top of many a native american totem...wonder if they do bring the dreams there too. enjoyed this |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Alison..i am sure ravens do dream in colour...the colour of this poem is probably what they are dreaming of it is so good..thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Even ravens dream of summer, dripping in color Confetti dreams of butterflies and flowers Summer sun magically turning feathers to deep blue Treasures pilfered and shining under roosting trees......................" A very lovely Piece Alison, I LOVED this raven Piece. ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
great poem, fine graphics image! I am especially fond of that: "Midnight sun warming raven beaks(!)" and, those Ravens: "Flying under blue skies, playing in wind currents Catching the breeze and soaring for simple joy... Looking from lofty heights at inattentive humans... wonder(ing) if they are too busy to dream in color(!)" serious, sustained applause!: |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Loved this, especially that ending! I miss those raucous ravens of the Interior, and their antics in my sister's pig yard, how they challenged all attempts to keep them off tarp-covered straw bales. They probably dream in technicolor...maybe even neon! |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
This is lovely...! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all has been said above already just adding my smile here |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
The ravens have not returned. They are probably 'puffed-up' trying to keep warm and readying themselves for the long flight North. Loved your poem and love the poem!!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bobby, I always wanted to find a raven's roost. I can only imagine what is tucked away around it - probably all sorts of magical treasures. Thank you - Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, I love ravens - they are funny and intelligent .. and danged tough too. My friend had two pet ravens growing up. My family had a pet Magpie. I love both birds. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
jo I am so glad that you are back. Thank you - it's good to have you reading again. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Heya James, Our Magpie loved red wine. It would have some and go perch on the back of the couch and take a snooze. Loved that bird too. Thank you for sharing your memory. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
podarku, Thank you. Dunno. I just write. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
RDB You never fail to make me smile. Thank you for that and for your kindness. You are a treasure. Ali |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Linda, Thank you for reading, commenting and saving. You are a lovely lady and I value your thoughts and friendship. Love you, A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kristabell, Thank you. I took the picture yesterday and didn't like the gray of it all. The raven said he didn't either - so we agreed to make it fun and colorful. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita They are so wonderful, aren't they. He created the magic, I just rode on the coattails of his dreams. Xoxoxoxo Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I know this to be true for the indigenous people of Alaska. The Raven and the Bear are very much a part of their cultures. Thank you for reading and wrting to this poem with your thoughts. A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Goldenrose Thank you. Do you think he might be saying, "Oh my God! It is raining freaking BUTTERFLIES - and I just filled up on old french Fries!!!" Thank you again. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, AW Friend. A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, Your applause warmed my heart. Thank you. You are a very special part of my PiP experience. Friends, Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
MidniteSun, I love when they fluff way up from the cold and stomp around arrogantly looking for food. They are so resiliant and smart. xoxoxo Ali |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, Simon. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dixie, Thank you for smiling on this poem. That makes it all so much more special. xoxoxo Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hi ML These Ravens stay all year. They are Northland Wonders in Alaska. I truly love their ability to survive in the extreme colds and still be out and about dumpster diving. I love them lots. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts ... xoxoxoxo A |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the confetti dreams. Well, I love all the images you've presented here. Very nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write this one Alison, I really enjoyed it, keep them coming. Lindsay |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was absolutely delightful! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Nan, Thank you so much - he liked the confetti dreams too. (smiles). Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lindsay, Thank you, my friend. I enjoy your work a lot. Alison |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Mysteria Thank you so much. You know, you made my night. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I loved your story about the ravens Alison Very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing Lindsay |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very good. always love your poem. Raven is allowed to dream big because it can fly. If I dream big I have to buy my own ticket to see the color rainbow. Lovely poem. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lindsay, It means to much to me that you stopped by again. (laughs) I do so love ravens. Ali |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
TomMark Thank you, my friend - dream big and fly, just dream big and fly! Alison |
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