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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2008-02-16 06:40 PM


Stark shadows dance
upon crisp crunchy snow,
as tree-silhouettes
mark time and space
while Sassy Squirrel
devours leftover popcorn
tossed 'neath a backyard tree.
She looks at the window,
aware I am watching her
fill her mommy-belly.
Sassy has been pulling tail hairs
for her nest in a nearby tree,
anticipating baby sassies.
By the time night shadows all,
three corn cobs on a stick
are set to stand
in front of the patio door,
Sunday fare for Miss Sassy.
Out in front a new resident hawk
sits patiently in the naked cherry tree,
stalking smaller birds
who scurry from bush to feeder
then back again to shelter
in the dense hedge row.
I ask the hawk to be swift,
not make his prey suffer
needlessly,
knowing each species
must eat to survive.
Such is the way
of all Life.

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-02-16 06:47 PM


Suburban wildlife Kacy..what a sassy squirrel she is too? I do hope that the hawk is not big enough for larger creatures? Otherwise the Sassy story sadly ends? And such a pity? This could be a new form of poetry? Serial animal poetry on the goings on of our domestic wild creatures? I can see it now? Sassy Squirrel...Dave the deer..Brock the Badger...Harry the hawk..Wiley the Coyote?..etc..LOL

Enjoyed this read of domestic wildlife, told with a real eye for detail..

Thank you Kacy..

Goldenrose.


Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

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2 posted 2008-02-16 06:52 PM


Miss Sassy is lucky to be cared for by Kacy!

This is beautiful, even though the end holds a bitter truth... yes each species must survive, but it always tears my heart apart!

I so love your wildlife poetic reports.

love
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-02-16 06:58 PM


My dear lady, a very beautiful poem. But I am knocking at my mind " do you read as a natural one?" My mind did not open the door for me.

Beautiful one either for nature or for politics .  

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4 posted 2008-02-16 07:33 PM


Phil, it's a very small hawk, but fast, so one can only guess what small prey will lose the game. I've often wondered if setting out bird feeders might violate the natural order of things, yet because we humans constantly disrupt the natural eco-systems and habitats of other creatures, I find offering them additional sustenance acceptable.
But I must admit, it's never much fun to witness the food chain in progress.

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5 posted 2008-02-16 10:14 PM


Maybe 'Sassy-squirrel' is 'pulling hairs' also just
at the thought of being a new mother...and/or
because the 'old boy' isn't around helping out
with nest building; etc.?!

Isn't it true though, that only the human animal
(the most dangerous and deadly predator) kills
for many reasons in addition to basal survival?

applause for your effective observations of the
fine minutia of Nature's ways...

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6 posted 2008-02-16 11:22 PM


I understand the way nature works but I don't like seeing it in action. When I was little we lived in Salem, Oregon just on the edge of the forest.
The hawks were always after the chickens and one of my jobs was to chase away the hawks by waving a towel at them. Your poem brought back memories.
                                  Ida

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7 posted 2008-02-17 12:20 PM


Such is the cycle....life, birth, death.  I'm with you on the request to Mr. Hawk.  Hope Sassy brings you many more stories.  Enjoyed this one, Kacy.  *hugs*......jo
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8 posted 2008-02-17 10:34 AM


watching wildlife is a great joy though sometimes sad

I have 2 bird feeders out and it's nice to watch the birds and squirrels



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9 posted 2008-02-17 11:57 AM


You have an uncanny connection to Nature and I appreciate your talent for sharing what you see and learn through your exquisite poetry.

Love & Nature's Light,

Linda



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10 posted 2008-02-17 12:22 PM


I love little squirrels!

I love them, love them, love them!!!!

They are just tooooo cute!

ARCTIC WIND  

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11 posted 2008-02-17 04:50 PM


the minutian-birds need to form a 'counterattack coalition!'

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12 posted 2008-02-18 06:27 PM


This is a fine write, MidniteSun! Wait until Sassy Squirrel brings the children by for lunch. They're mighty cute when they're little. Sometimes they get sleepy halfway through their meal and have to take a nap. I admire your eye for the big picture and the close-ups, and your writing always leaves me wishing for more.
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13 posted 2008-02-19 10:20 PM


This is wonderful - I love how you just ask the hawk to be swift.  You are a real nature baby, baby.

Lovin' this,
Ali

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14 posted 2008-02-20 03:27 AM


Kacy, I loved this poem. I like to watch the squirrels and birds out of the window. Those babies are going to be so cute when they start helping their Mom go for their food.

It was good to read you again.

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15 posted 2008-02-20 08:35 AM


Nice to see you visit Ethel!
And thanking each of you for letting me share Sassy and gang with you.

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16 posted 2008-02-22 05:01 PM


some of the finest signs of Spring!
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