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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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pray By the window of the funeral and florescent flower See, the face of her. The hunger does blend with grief. She comes out to stand at a outstretch porch, stand stiff. At the outside a spread of night…. The funeral and florescent flower Those with sad glory and glorious glaze. White glaze, That exudes into the winter of a night. Wakes a nocturnal bird Which spreads its wings to a flight. The claw is still seeking its first pray. Its first pray still evading Evading mind and her haunting memory. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Made me shiver in its intensity, dear Poddar! Our worlds seem to touch in sadness!! Powerful imagery! love Margherita  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Pod You are improving with each post,, gad to see you are persevering John |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The intensity of this grief, brought visions of loss, but not necessarily death. Your delivery is nothing less than brilliant, in the way you weave that emotion. The ache was passionately rendered. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
dark, dark poem. Good!! |
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