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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it has been there like love I guess the gravel of just wanting to making that noise under mind boots when we pass each other on the stairs while looking back at bon fires and little rivers that were tiptoes never deep enough to swim in but always mirroring what we didn't see I feel you now in your long gown the one with nothing on sleeves as you pretend to be tree like friendly and lean over my shoulder willowing acting nonchalant about my climbing but remaining still in the winds in case we needed each other just to redo the skyline and I taste you on the sky again then _____________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles.... Mr Daark... sometimes you make my smile last all day long... enjoyed! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b..then I have done well...please keep smiling always ms..thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it is always fun to "ride along" with your words, D warm hugs M |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
your words are confident! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs...thanks lady friend __________ friend poddarku, thank you for the read |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Is it the bonfire of the vanities that reflects off little rivers when word rafts float downstream? Only to be scooped up, gently because of still winds then hung to dry on the skyline of your mind. Now that's a trip you won't see on the Travel Channel. Enjoyed this, DS. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...my travel channel is so very special..thank you for tuning in for a bit. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful and very soft...just beautiful. true romantic poem. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
TomMark, thanks my friend |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This ... is simply beautiful. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a continuous gift of beauty. This is almost painfully beautiful. love Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you hon for the eyes ____________ ms mar, thank you for reading this one ms |
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