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Healing Moon
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Healing Moon |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Healing Moon These grand-primal hills… patient sentinels of pristine serenity and ‘Deep-Time’ splendor, loft far above the mordant world of smoky ennui and man’s infinitely grasping discontent, providing a perfect winter evening’s fine reclusion, to await a healing moon. --- b. e. adams (2/28/08) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (02-28-2008 07:40 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"loft far above the mordant world of smoky ennui" BRAVO! IWIWT! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"IWIWT" ?! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I wish I wrote that! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
I always dream IWIWT.  |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
I especially like your description of the mountains: "loft far above the mordant world of smoky ennui and man’s infinitely grasping discontent," Well done! And if I wrote, I'd wish I wrote that too! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
quote: I have another interpretaion of this abbreviation... I WISH I WAS THERE ! Bruce, the mental pictures you are able to paint with your pen always make me want to visit... I am becoming a virtual tourist wandering the landscape of your imagination John |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful, dear Bruce! It is a privilege to be so "one" with Nature, you and your poetry are precious. love Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I wish I wrote that AND I wish I was there! Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Morning! Bruce-- This is a very lovely post you got here, I really LIKE IT! All your poems are so descriptive, that really makes us see what you are writing about, and how we can all join you in seeing what you are seeing! ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a good and graphic picture of nighttime in the winter woods. Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Do your surroundings really look like that, Bruce... (how far away from me did you say you were?)  M |
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