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The Doves Sonnet... repost for my Valentine
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The Doves Sonnet... repost for my Valentine |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The Doves Sonnet... for my Valentine The trust I give these days is without fear And winters bite has lost its chill to me That crystal on my cheek is not a tear Although the glint may speak of hidden glee I heard the pain you spoke for all those years And wondered at the inner strength you had I hope that your new path be filled with cheer And forks or bends don’t ever make you sad On balcony we stood above the crowd And talked about this feeling in our hearts The shock that we could say these thoughts out loud As if these years were moments just apart In you I feel the freeing of the doves As I was wind and welcomed you with love. James Parker Haley Dec 22, 2005-Jan 24, 2007 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Parker, Good use of end rhymes in this poem. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James.. so nice to read you again! beautiful sentiments here... love RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
enjoyed!!!  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Wow! Well done! Robert |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful words from a beautiful soul...as always...makes me shiver..  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Wonderful expression here. K |
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