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A Shadow’s Valentine
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A Shadow’s Valentine |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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A Shadow’s Valentine I remember a before conversation even remember the first time I felt my breath taken away by you how could I have known that moments could have changed my life forever time has known us well before we came to the place we are now and I just wonder could I ever love you more "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
a breath taken from you could change a life forever |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great poem! I love the Title too Happy Valentine's Day  |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I am finding it hard to write down what I am thinking, so I will just say, this is a great poem and I love the structure of it. K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious  |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it is good.what is a "before conversation"? i enjoyed your piece |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write, my friend, and very fitting for the day. Soft, longing and loving. Not sure "loving you more" is as important as loving you constantly, through all the tribulations, though I do agree with what you say whole heartedly j. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful and indeed soft tuned. I am glad that you have time to write poems. always good one. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ You shed gentle light on the shadow of love~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
"loves" the best we have to give... stay blessed dale |
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