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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2008-02-14 02:09 PM


My heart, my life
is open now, as
a book shining radiant
sunbeams outward for your
inspection, your satisfied mind.
Come take me and
my ever deepening love
for you. You are
all i want, all
i shall ever hold
dearer than my next
breath. Please be my
eternal love light shining
gold to me through
time and space, for
i am adrift there,
floating solitary like Mars
in a gloaming cosmos.

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2008-02-14 03:48 PM


a grand-fine "incurable romantics" day tribute!...

especially:

"You are
all i want, all
i shall ever hold
dearer than my next
breath...my
eternal love light shining
... through
time and space(!)"

applause!!

Kristabell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
2 posted 2008-02-14 07:43 PM


Wonderful.

K

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