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Kristabell
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0 posted 2008-02-14 12:51 PM



A fabric of words, woven to create imagery,
A certain sequence of finality, a line for the eternal,
Explanations of the unknown, paths to universal understanding,
Fathomless depths of communication, and trials by error.
To each his own path, line, explanation,
Fabric, sequence, and depth.
The foreseen is unknowable, the universe unfathomable,
Communication is understanding, and finality a line.
Trial by error, eternity’s sequence,
Woven in words, the foreseen explanation.


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1 posted 2008-02-14 01:17 PM


Kristabell~
You have *gifted* us with some pondering thoughts of wisdom~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-02-14 03:13 PM


A nice flow of thoughts...James
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3 posted 2008-02-14 06:03 PM


Kristabell, enjoyed your thoughts here my friend, thank you so much for sharing your wisdom.

Rick

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4 posted 2008-02-14 07:14 PM


I'm enjoying this one, Kris...and I think
because imagery belongs to not just poetic words, but numbers as well as theories and contemplations...

Yes, I'm liking this poem very much.



Kristabell
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5 posted 2008-02-14 11:06 PM


Thanks everyone. It's crazy because it sort of just fell together. i find that when I just let down all of my restraints, the best of my work ends up on the page.

K

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6 posted 2008-02-16 10:48 PM


Most beautifully said.
Great work.

Alison

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