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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2008-02-13 10:44 PM



It hammers
the calloused extremities,
though she is parched
for its dousing
of hurricanes,
her teardrops redundant,
align on the branches,
ripping and beading
her seams,
silver dreams knead
simultaneously.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-02-14 02:51 AM


quote:
her teardrops redundant,
align on the branches,
ripping and beading
her seams,
silver dreams knead
simultaneously.



I am moved to tears by the intense beauty of your poem, dear Michele!

wow!

love and hugs
Margherita

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-02-14 08:12 AM


There is power in Nature ~ and in your poetry!

May I borrow some of your ink, Goddess?!?

Giving you a Valentine's Day hug,

Linda

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2008-02-14 08:14 AM


thanks sweet ladies
happy hearts to you both too

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2008-02-16 08:16 PM


You have such a connection to nature Michelle...always so striking.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2008-02-16 08:46 PM


Another unique tree-song, Mish.
iliana
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6 posted 2008-02-17 01:05 AM


You are such an artist, oh Inked One!  *hugs*.....jo
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2008-02-19 11:47 PM


You say so much with so few words.  What really gets me is you never miss a beat.  
I felt the bend and sway, and more importantly the strength in your words~

I've missed reading you blondielocks~  


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8 posted 2008-02-20 02:32 AM


Michelle, this is so beautiful. You really do have a unique connection with nature, sweet lady. I have missed reading your poetry.
Hugs,
Ethel
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inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2008-02-20 06:55 AM


thanks sister treegoddesses and poets
hugs
me

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