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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-02-13 08:14 PM


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After I’m dead
Get yourself— a Ouija board—

And then we’ll talk


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Bobby Jordan
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1 posted 2008-02-13 08:21 PM


Huan Yi,

Short and sweet.

I'll talk to you later.

Bobby

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-02-13 08:36 PM


Do I really believe that?

Always good poem.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-02-14 05:30 AM


smiles... John, you manage to say a lot with very few words.. enjoyed my friend Happy Valentines Day!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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4 posted 2008-02-14 11:05 AM


John~
You have no idea just how much I enjoyed this one~
Just know that I did !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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5 posted 2008-02-14 11:17 AM



secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2008-02-14 03:38 PM


This was great!

[for me, perfectly timed 'comic relief!']

serious applause!!

Sunshine
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7 posted 2008-02-14 04:08 PM


I'm liking this one, John.

It weighs beyond now.


serenity blaze
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8 posted 2008-02-14 04:21 PM


Click on the link below for my reply:
http://www.museumoftalkingboards.com/WebOuija.html



Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-02-15 01:21 AM


Funny.
   Ida

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10 posted 2008-02-15 02:17 AM


That's the spirit! lol

Adorable!!!


EA

Angel4aKing
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11 posted 2008-05-05 03:41 AM


I may as well have heard this one before or felt like saying it myself.

~~~kingsangel~~~

Angel4aKing
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12 posted 2008-05-05 02:39 PM


PS I wanna see this on a bumpersticker!!! I already have people ready to  buy 'em!!!! Wanna go into business with me!!??!! LOL

~~~kingsangel~~~

gilead
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13 posted 2008-05-05 03:18 PM


There's a wry sense of irony in this one---tongue in cheek, funny, but deadly serious!

Art

jwesley
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14 posted 2008-05-05 03:22 PM


...ah....bringing back many a nite with smoke-filled rooms (never been a smoker, me, but I giggled with the rest of them)lots of Led Zep, Black Sabbath and more. And girls...wow, and GIRLS! WOW!

Used the Board many a time...never had an answer but sure saw it spook many a friend...I think it was the Board and not the smoke-filled room (or the booze)--- maybe the girls, though.

Nice piece...

jimmy

shyvl
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15 posted 2008-05-05 03:53 PM


Huan Yi-  Direct and to the point.  I know several times when I would have liked to have this on hand to reply.  Thanks for the pleasure of reading your work
sharyn

Marchmadness
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16 posted 2008-05-05 03:58 PM


I love a good sence of humor, this poem is great, sending it back to the top.
                                Ida

jmjovies
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17 posted 2008-05-07 12:54 PM


oh my i like this
jwesley
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18 posted 2008-05-07 09:41 PM


I REALLY LIKE THIS!!! Let's send it around again!!!

jimmy

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19 posted 2008-05-07 10:17 PM


Enjoyed it Huan YI!

ARCTIC WIND

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