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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Transcendence On the mirror-edge between slate grey sky and celadon lake, a small blue boat drifts, time-abeyant… transcending all purpose. ~ |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, Very well put. I think things that transcend purpose are greatly artistic. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm in agreement with Bobby. A fine write. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful!!! Is This the moment that we let ourself disappear totally from existence? Is this the moment that our soul melted with nature? Is this the moment we truly felt eternity? why do we feel like this? And sometimes tears come out? beautiful poem truly. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This feels so familiar, as though it is somehow a part of my soul. I know this palette, and can almost name the artist. Almost... You've written a fine tribute to this image. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ I was brought to the edge of recall of the beauty of silence-in-tow, my favorite time sailing across a small lake in Clermont, FL~ Ah ... those are the times of fond remember~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This has got my mind whirling.  This captures a lot with few words.K |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love this moment in time. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
alwasy so in tune with nature beautiful write |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
I'd so like to be laying on my back in that boat, the sun on my face & a song in my heart... Thanks Bruce |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What can I say? ALWAYS enjoy what you write! j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You evoke an image that induces contemplation. Truly beautiful with lingering feelings of peace. love Margherita |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Capturing a moment in time and so few words but much depth of meaning.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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