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Open Poetry #42

Remedy

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

0 posted 2008-02-13 02:47 PM

Beyond the bounds of eternity,
Across the all-encompassing horizon,
Above the branches of Earth,
Amongst stars of the universe
invading fortresses of resistance,
Enclosing revolutions of time,
Is a simple sweet melody,
Cradled in wings of forever
called forth with perfect harmony,
By one soul who leads me home.

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-02-13 04:17 PM

Kristabell,

This is very good. In particular, I enjoyed:

“Cradled in wings of forever
called forth with perfect harmony,
By one soul who leads me home.”

I like your name too.

Bobby

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-13 06:00 PM

Beautiful!!
love this one.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-02-13 07:08 PM

Wonderful structure, wonderful verse!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-02-13 07:14 PM

Very beautiful indeed!

love
Margherita

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2008-02-14 12:23 PM

Thanks you everyone. It's funny because this was the first poem I ever talked out before writing.

K

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