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vandana
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0 posted 2008-02-13 11:35 AM



Iam mood to sing a song,
Early morning rain makes me
feel like Iam in heaven
Knowing you,
Loving words,
Whispering into my ears,
Laughing voice,
Through the heart beat
Early morning rain,
Let you hold me,
Don't let it go,
Take my soul
Take my heart,
Take me to the highest mountain
I want to climb and shout
I love you
The echoes I hear
through the woods
Far from the places I go,
Knowing the years
soon holds my breath away,
Waking sun,
Morning sun
That is what I need
to look upon them
Let the past leave the pain behind
Morning song
That is all I want to hear



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-02-13 11:51 AM


quote:
Take me to the highest mountain
I want to climb and shout
I love you
The echoes I hear
through the woods
Far from the places I go,



Very beautiful, dear vandana! I love the image of shouting from the top of the mountains your love.

love
Margherita

Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 2008-02-13 03:49 PM


Vandana,

I like this a great deal.  I especially like the idea of:

"Far from the places I go,"

Sometimes I wish for that.  Not often though.

Bobby

TomMark
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3 posted 2008-02-13 06:07 PM


If human darkens our life, Sun and songs always bright it.
enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-02-15 04:53 PM


Very nice...James
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2008-02-15 07:06 PM


VanDanaDear~
It is always good to see you visit with us~
I love the morning ... and your song of love is refreshing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-02-15 09:55 PM


a very beautiful morning song Vandana! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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7 posted 2008-02-16 11:48 AM


I loved the first line...

I am mood to sing a song...

all I saw was a smiling face.

Enjoyed this very much, Vandana.

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2008-02-16 12:13 PM


Let the past leave the pain behind
Morning song
That is all I want to hear


sounds wonderful to me


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9 posted 2008-02-17 12:43 PM


Now I smile, vandana, because I really like your song.


poddarku
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10 posted 2008-02-17 01:09 AM


this poem is timelessly simple and hence live long in my memory.


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