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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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0 posted 2008-02-13 11:22 AM



Fully guarding what i will let no one hurt again
Feeling the coldness of a previous time
When i had closed myself in
Untouchable... i was called once,
I laughed at the stranger...
Yet he read right through me..
Tormented by one foolish thought...
I throw in my towel,
Giving up on a dream not meant for me....

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-02-13 08:42 PM


MindBodySoul,

Yeah, this is excellent work.  I know how that feels.

This is good writing.

Bobby

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