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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-02-13 06:32 AM



sometimes it was amazing how
we seemed to have the same clothing on
like we felt the same urges
and showed up wearing them
wrong side out on purpose

so the other could see that side
and then we would laugh for a moment
before getting into the serious things
that made us both change again
into something more comfortable

that we borrowed from each other
the one size fits all things
that we both had a use for
and tried to break too often
but never did succeed in breaking

we only made them work better


____________

daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-13 06:51 AM


nice Mr Daark... your words inspire some wonderful imagery... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2008-02-13 07:50 AM


enjoyed the view~~

M

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-13 10:34 AM


I think, this is fun, dear d.!

love
Margherita

TomMark
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4 posted 2008-02-13 11:54 AM


love the read. I am still trying to read out what the "thing" is.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-02-13 05:51 PM


ms r & b, thanks lady friend

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ms MMs, thanks babe

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ms mar, thank you hon for the eyes


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tommark..things...those feelings, items, actions we all fit together with others..thanks guy

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6 posted 2008-02-14 03:20 AM


Yes - there is a lot to think about here.  I like this and - often find myself halfway through my day and realize my shirt is inside out.  Embarrassing fact I probably did not have to share.

A

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2008-02-14 08:17 AM


your size fits me just fine
sublime..........
happy hearts day, lots of love and lovin

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2008-02-14 02:28 PM


Awww yer so sweet D, wantin to share your toys like that....Happy V-day babe,   hugs n love n stuff....  
Sunshine
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9 posted 2008-02-14 04:10 PM


For the sake of me I cannot figure out
why my mind flitted back to the time
when boys and girls wore look-alike shirts...

but yep, that's what came to mind.




Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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10 posted 2008-02-15 06:17 AM


ms ali-san, thanks for wearing that shirt...and the smile.

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ms inky, you smile me, thanks babe


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ms gs, thanks donna for the eyes


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ms sun, thank you for taking this walk for a moment

Angel4aKing
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11 posted 2008-02-15 11:36 PM


By far one of my favorites of yours I will definitely add this one to my library!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2008-02-16 06:56 AM


ms angel, thank you for the read..you bless me
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